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Jack Everly's avatar

Wonderful effort, Desiree. You write extremely well. I have the feeling Chuck will have something important to say regarding improvement (haven't read his take yet), and I'm sure his advice will be golden, but your work here is golden for fans of the art...

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Desiree's avatar

Thanks, Jack! Chuck provided me with some great actionable feedback and I'm so excited to finish this first draft, so I can start rewriting. Thanks for reading my stuff :)

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Jack Everly's avatar

It was my pleasure Desiree. But do you think you could send me the link where he reviewed the piece? Seem to have misplaced it in my files...Thanks!

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Thanks so much!!

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